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DrHeLlScreaM
07-08-2009, 08:33 PM
The One who knew the Blood, traveled in forgotten, forbidden crypt where no human could enter. Suddenly he heard a groan in the distance and wandering for a bit under the obscure arches of tunnels, made not by any human, ran into nailed to live coals man, the chains with inner spikes plunged in his flesh. His body was one big wound, it wasn't clear how he could continue to live.
- Who are you? - asked the One who knew Blood.
- I know Pain. - sobbed the man - from thousands of years i'm tormented here and my servants are inventing finer tortures every day. I can withstand all the Pain but I still can't reach the Enlightenment. I can't set off at the Road of Enlightenment, because there is no torment that can awake the Enlightenment in me.
- So you need tremendous torture to find the Road? - Smiled the One who knew Blood - There is nothing easier than this, listen to what i have to tell you: the ages of torment were in vain. Now I'm going to kill you and you will never know the Enlightenment.
- NO! - begun screaming and convulsing the sorrowful man. The cold echo roved long time around the stone arches, but the One who knew Blood drew near to kill him, and in this short moment, only for a part of the second, until the hand of the One who knew Blood ripped his head, the man finally reached the thing he tried in so many ages of torment. He acquainted the Pain and died with blessed smile on his face. The One who knew Blood continued on his crusade in the name of Satan.

JoeMamaInk
07-10-2009, 10:55 PM
wait... what...?

lilcutiepie
07-11-2009, 07:31 AM
Quite a good story
But you sometimes get slightly confused with the characters, but that must be my messed up head lo
Anyway you can extend the story? Seeing as its well written, be interesting to see if you could do anything more with it^^

JoeMamaInk
07-11-2009, 08:16 PM
i like it the way it is!!!!!!!!!! its creepy and beautifull at the same time!!!!!!!!!!!!!puppy-eyes

DrHeLlScreaM
07-11-2009, 09:20 PM
Happy you liked it. But i think i should leave the One who knew Blood and his crusade be forgotten.

JoeMamaInk
07-11-2009, 09:35 PM
.... if only that was possible.... if only...

D.nebra
12-02-2009, 09:56 PM
A fine tale, very descriptive By all means continue it soon. It is great to see new additions in one of the best sections here.