In the dark corner of my room...

[Harijaja]

Please Dont mind any bad gramma, lack of format of anything. O_o

As i sit in this dark corner of my room, things come and go, fleeting moments of madness come knocking to my door, as i try to hold on. My feelings have run from my side looking for someone they can understand. Silence whispers softly in my ear the ever lasting song of loneliness.Time sits by my side and conforts me with it's stories as we drink this bitter cup of coffe. In the endless carnival of memories that is my mind, i see you pass by, but i can't grab your hand, i can't hold you in my arms. And in coldness of this empty space i cuddle to what little sanity i still have left, While again and again I lose myself waiting in this dark corner of my emtpy room.

Por EH.

Please dont copy without permission (why would anyone would want to copy this crap anyway ¬¬)cry~

[Tetralix]

You describe the emotions pretty intense. I can feel the loneliness and despair by reading it. That overwhelming feeling of being totally alone and not being understood/needed by anyone, and the suffering of the mind that comes with it. Perhaps the underlying theme of the poem is about a lost love or the longing for a love that was not ment to be?

Anyway i just wanted to say that i liked the poem, well done. thumbs-up

[kyoko]

i agree with tetralix ^^ this poems is has a deep feelin n its very good .... i liked ur poem its very good :D

[Harijaja]

Thanks you all you make me very happypuppy-eyes.

Well Tetralix I guess i made it kind of ambiguous in case you identify more easily with either one :P Thank you very much for comment and i'm glad you liked it, and your sig is just too cool!!! ^_^

[nezzziel]

that was really heartfelt man.

i liked that it was raw emotion with no structure.
it was just you stating your feelings with no boundaries such as quartets etc.

well done my friend.