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Tslip
08-10-2009, 02:56 AM
Here's a poem I made for class a while back

"We are all one and the same"

Space is all that it takes to make You: You
and to make Me: Me
But it is not the way we ought to be
struggling my brother regardless of your circumastance
Weeping my sister because of a happenstance

But it is not just you we are all the same
No thought better no heart redder
that beats as strong than your own counter measures
against your own plight, with which you must give your own might
To defeat your own restrictions on must remember
That despite your own beginnings with which others do not
you all have a goal

To fight for what you want, your rights and not
with might, or plight you are a Human being
and Gender does not mean a thing
as race is something that should not make us squwhim
your are Human
a being that is here for all to see
but you are not alone
for we all walk together and not alone
Although our paths may different I am glad to say We are all different
But we are all one and the same

nezzziel
08-13-2009, 06:46 AM
but you are not alone
for we all walk together and not alone
Although our paths may different I am glad to say We are all different
But we are all one and the same


i really liked those lines...
this was really good.

i like the idea you were trying to convey.

this is so true.
we are different
but we are the only humans out there and we are the same.
we shall stand together.

Tslip
08-13-2009, 04:36 PM
thanks that really meant alot to me

aUsCkEs
08-13-2009, 04:47 PM
It's actually pretty good. In fact, I think I started to rapping it while reading...(or perhaps hip-hoping?!)

Tslip
08-13-2009, 05:01 PM
hehe thanks, I don't know I just tried to hip-hop it and I'd have to change some things to make it flow right. Maybe a future project for me? But if ya liked this then read my story in the story section

Shadowbutterfly
08-14-2009, 03:58 AM
Tslip, that's beautiful.
Please write more.

Tslip
08-19-2009, 04:36 AM
I'm working on some more right now I might Post them here a little here