lilcutiepie's crappy poems...

[lilcutiepie]

My crappy poems

Warning: Poem is copyrighted to me.
Drifting

I drift away from all thats around me
I drift away from those whom I love
I drift away from who I am
I drift away forever

Warning: Poem is copyrighted to me.
Quietly
I quietly creep around the house
I quietly peep into to each room
I quietly creep over to you
I quickly kiss you goodbye..


Just made them up on the spot so they suck..who cares

[13kira13]

I have always liked the truth behind you poems molly. They kinda let you in to see who you are. I really missed them while i was gone

[lilcutiepie]

Thanks, I always have a meaning behind anything I write really

[13kira13]

And thats what i like. I wish i had that kinda honesty in my writing

[lilcutiepie]

Haha, my poems aren't even good so it doesn't matter really lol

[13kira13]

I like them so could you please post more

[lilcutiepie]

I don't have anymore right now and I'm too lazy to come up with one on the spot

[lilcutiepie]

Your confusion,
My love,
Your heart,
My flutter.

Your confused about thigns in life,
But I want to be there to love you,
Your heart has trapped mine in loving care,
Yet my heart still flutters around you.

Be mine, my only one,
Be by my side like no-one else,
Hold my hand whenever we're near,
Hold on and never let go.

[lilcutiepie]

1 heart that will never heal
Another that florishes beyond belief
2 legs that can no longer walk
Others that run into his loving arms
3 hearts that are filled with love
Elsewhere, only 2 hearts come out on top
4 ways to visit you
Others find no way at all
5 ways to say I'm sorry
and to save me from the nothingness I've become

I suck at poetryyyyyyyyyyyy

[13kira13]

Its great molly. I really like it.

[lilcutiepie]

Thanks Warren

Even though I suck at poetry..

[13kira13]

Your welcome and no you don't hun

[Forgotten Dreams]

Your confusion,
My love,
Your heart,
My flutter.

Your confused about thigns in life,
But I want to be there to love you,
Your heart has trapped mine in loving care,
Yet my heart still flutters around you.

Be mine, my only one,
Be by my side like no-one else,
Hold my hand whenever we're near,
Hold on and never let go.

I can feel the love. Nyah! Well done dear ^^

[Shadowbutterfly]

They aren't crappy!
Your style is just different from everyone else's. ^^
More, I demand more!
D:<

[lilcutiepie]

They are crappy =]

And I have no more lol, I make mine up on the spot lol

[lilcutiepie]

Why must we live through life?
The torment, the heartache,
The sorrow and tears.

We live through our lives,
To understand the reasons,
Why so many hate us.

The hate, the love,
They never equal out,
So who knows what to feel in their heart.

We're judged by others,
And we judge them aswell,
We're never at peace with each other.

The murders, the rapes,
So many people hurt,
In a world we're meant to feel safe in.

Why must we live through life?
The pain, the blood,
The tears and sweat.

The answer to our question,
is that there are no answers,
Life is a game no-one can win..

[Shadowbutterfly]

I really like it Molly, and besides a few spelling errors, it's flawless.
(:

[13kira13]

Yeah i really liked it. It has a great beat to it

[lilcutiepie]

My brain doesn't work, so spelling mistakes are bound to happen

And thanks, although I'm not good at poetry

[Shadowbutterfly]

I figured, and I'm not nagging about spelling.
o:
I like it, it was well written.
MOAR!
-insert angry dragon face with smoking nostrils-
<.<

[lilcutiepie]

I make up poems on the spot, and I'm too lazy to right now

[Shadowbutterfly]

I know, that's how I do it too. ^^
And most of the time I have no paper with me.
v.v

[diamonddust]

i love it, im not a very good poet, but i think you are

[lilcutiepie]

i love it, im not a very good poet, but i think you are

Ah thank you =]
Although I'm really not much of a poet