Broken and Damaged

[Mangalover9]

I'm trying so hard to be happy and smile
And even though it's been awhile,
I need so badly to cry
I want so badly to die.
Now there is a scar on my heart
And I'm falling apart,
I want to run and go hide
Since my emotions are all in a big tide;
I feel like I'm broken and damaged.

I've loved and I've lost
I've turned and I've tossed,
I can't stop thinking of you
I just don't know what to do.
I'm sad and depressed
And making everyone stressed,
I want to break down
But I thought I had to be strong with everyone around;
I feel like I'm broken and damaged.

I want to lock up my heart
But I just don't know how to start,
I want to lock it and throw it into the sea
And break and destroy the key.
I just can't take the pain
And if it doesn't stop soon I might go insane,
You really don't care
So please wake me from this nightmare;
I feel like I'm broken and damaged.

[Shadowbutterfly]

I love it Miranda, it's very beautiful and I can relate perfectly with your feelings and this poem.
Please post more. ^^

[Mangalover9]

thanks amber. i will try to write more but i can only write poems when i'm strongly experincing an emotion.

[13kira13]

Yeah miranda this is excellent. Its so... I am freakings speechless. Its amazing.

[Mangalover9]

Thanks, yea my friends said it was good, but depressing.

[Ninja]

damn! your so good with this. writeee moreeee!!!

[Azula]

It feels like I'm reading a song lyric! This will surely be a nice song!

Great Job.

[aUsCkEs]

Holy smokes. Just lovely.

[Ninja]

ive featured ur poem in the frontpage btw. write more!

[zzpolarbear]

Since my emotions are all in a big tide;

I want to lock it and throw it into the sea
And break and destroy the key.


i like what you did here, its like your emotions are the raging sea and you want to lose your heart in it. very nice

keep it coming!

[diamonddust]

i love this poem, no matter how many times i read it it gets better. i would say to write more, but i know to do that you would have to be sad or depressed and i don't want that. Stay Happy :P